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There once was a child,
Who never spoke a word.
He never changed his face,
Never cried when he got hurt.

Those dearest to him stood away,
They didn't know what to do.
And since they treated him in silence,
Silence became the only thing he knew.

As the years passed and he grew
He still remained the same,
Never speaking to anyone
And for that, no one ever came.

He was always picked on,
Someone always had something to say;
Either 'you are dead inside',
Or 'your life is wasted away'.

Through all the insults, the words,
The bruises, and the pain,
He tolerated it all, turned away,
He remained silent, he never changed.

His life kept getting worse.
He was no longer shown love,
He was just another silent boy
Who only deserved another shove.

No one ever showed sympathy.
No one saw that he was torn.
No one ever saw him as a person.
To them, he wasn't even born.

But he did learn how to feel,
The dormant feelings finally awoke.
The agony he felt towards their words,
The pain from the hits and words they spoke.

He felt though, that it was too late,
Trying to change now wouldn't help.
He was already who he was,
He didn't know what to do with himself.

His life, to him, was always rotten,
But no one ever would have known.
His life wasn't seen in his face,
His pain was never shown.

Just because he was silent,
Didn't mean he wanted help.
Just because he looked expressionless,
Didn't mean he never doubted himself.

But everyone treated him the same
And he continued to endure it all,
And because silence was all he knew,
He stayed that way, ready to fall.

He had always vowed to himself
That one day he would learn to speak,
That he would tell everyone how he felt,
That he actually never was weak.

He couldn't bring himself to it though,
No matter how much he wanted or tried.
His words ended up lost and gone,
And when he was alone he sighed and cried.

No one would see how afraid he was,
He couldn't help that he was scared.
For all he knew, he lived in hate,
No one understood, and no one cared.

Then one day,
One day,
He snapped.
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I don't even really know what this is.
A poem or a story.
I'm thinking about making another part.
Still, I don't want it to turn out gory.

:iconmiseryplz:
Whatever.
This came to me in a dream.
A lot of poems come from dreams, now that I think about it...

Part 2:[link]

:icondonotplz::iconmyartplz:

If you like this one, Please read my best poem "Bully"! Link:[link]
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:iconmegareyes:
MEGAREYES Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
So, was there a real boy who was like this?
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InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, in a way yes, and at the same time, no.
The boy depicted in the poem series is based from my own situations and experiences, and from another person I know who also has the same problems.
It also can be directed towards other juveniles who experience the same problems.
For me, the boy represents all of the people who have had these problems, and came to a point to where they found it no longer tolerable, but had their lives turned around by a person who became their biggest inspiration.
So I suppose then, that the boy is very real.
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Miscellaneous123 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Bravo :) I love the word play in this poem :) It came together very nicely! :iconclapplz:
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you.
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:iconmiscellaneous123:
Miscellaneous123 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You have played with the words very well my friend! It's a pleasure reading 'cause you have matched up the rhymes perfectly and still kept to the subject. I envy you that. Great work!
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InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you!
be sure to check out part 2,
AND
if you like, my other poem titled "Bully". :)
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frostheartw Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE THIS!!!!!
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
I just uploaded part 2,
so be sure to check it out!
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:iconfrostheartw:
frostheartw Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I did. IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanx!
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:iconfrostheartw:
frostheartw Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome
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moonlightnight101 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Simply wonderful! I love this!!!
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks!
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:iconinu333:
Inu333 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love this.
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!
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MockingJay1256 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely amazing! :D love the way its written kinda like a story, but it rhymes like a poem. :)
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was kinda tryin to make it that way...
I'm glad you like it!
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:iconmockingjay1256:
MockingJay1256 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well you certainly did a good job! and you're welcome. :)
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KaoriSilverMoon Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good.
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you.
Dou you think I should make a second part?
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:iconkaorisilvermoon:
KaoriSilverMoon Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes.
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mkay.
I'll come up with one then...
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:iconkaorisilvermoon:
KaoriSilverMoon Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You do that.
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
mkay.
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:iconbadenstern:
badenstern Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
it's strong. So strong
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
:iconcryforeverplz:
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:iconbadenstern:
badenstern Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
thank for this poem.
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yourewelcome.
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girlfromhellcomehome Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
it's nice.. but sad :(
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
That was exactly what I as aiming for.
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2ndCandle Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this. :) its something different that caught my eye.

You really displayed a whole story with these words. Its something that gets people thinking and that's what a writer wants. Overall, great job!
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
I was really trying hard to turn this into more of a story, and not just a description.
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:iconhavingadream31:
HavingADream31 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
The written work really stood out! It's beautiful! The story makes me sad but this means that you made an awesome job! Hence, :love:
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InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
I want to reach the hearts of many, whether its :iconloveloveplz: or :iconmiseryplz: or :iconcrycryplz:
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:iconhavingadream31:
HavingADream31 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Don't worry! You will reach them!! One soul at a time! :happycry:
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool.
Thanx! :iconsupertighthugplz:
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HavingADream31 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Your Welcome! :D
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Carigirl2011 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
One word:
Wow.
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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vokitty Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
this. is. amazing.
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:iconinvaderzib13:
InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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